#writeastorychallenge 01/01/17

Ma participation de la journée pour #writeastorychallenge. En français et en anglais.
My participation of the day for #writeastorychallenge. English version below.


La machinerie médicale, occupant tout l’espace de la chambre, se mit à biper avec frénésie. Giovanni resta stoïque, ses yeux gris aussi froids que l’acier, comme le devait un chef de famille. Toujours. Même quand il n’était pas en fonction. Même quand son temps était passé.

Le chef actuel était étendu sur le lit, à peine visible, aussi blanche que les draps et les coussins autour d’elle. Une petite fille, malade depuis sa naissance. Non, Donella n’était plus une petite fille maintenant. Elle prenait son rôle à cœur, faisant tout ce qu’on attendait d’elle. Et elle ne verrait jamais sa dix-huitième année.

Giovanni ne pouvait rien faire. Il avait fait plus que n’importe qui, pour ses deux filles, mais son temps était passé. Il avait trop perdu pour lutter à nouveau contre la destinée… mais il avait préparé son aînée à continuer son oeuvre. Elle n’en avait aucune idée, mais Alessa serait celle qui sauverait sa jeune sœur. Tout comme il avait fait pour elles quand elles étaient trop petites pour s’en souvenir.

Il avait reparlé du jeu familial de tarot ces derniers jours. Objet mythique, qui les protégeait et les maudissait depuis des siècles. Le changement allait se produire. Il n’avait pas d’autre choix que de laisser le destin de Donella entre les mains d’Alessa — l’incapable aînée.


The medical computers, all around the room, went into a beeping frenzy. Giovanni stood still, his grey eyes as cold as steel, as a family chief should. Always. Even not on duty. Even when his time has gone.

The actual one was lying on the bed, barely seen as she was as white as the sheets and cushions around her. Little girl, ill since her birth. No, Donella was no little girl now. She took her role at heart, making everything she could to abide to expectations. As a result, she may never see her eighteen year.

There was nothing he could do. He has done more than anyone in the past, for both his daughters, but now, his time was gone. He lost too much to go against destiny one more… but he prepared his firstborn to keep on his legacy. She didn’t know of it, but Alessa would be the one to save her younger sister. As he did for both when they were too little to remember.

He did spoke again on the last few days of the family tarot game. Mystical item, protecting and cursing them for centuries. The change was about to happens. He had no choice, but to put Donella’s fate on Alessa’s hands — the useless firstborn.


A demain pour la suite !
Stay tuned, new part tomorrow !

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